Friday, January 26, 2024

Snyder for the Day


 "Civilization is part of nature--our egos play in the fields of the unconscious--history takes place in the Holocene--human culture is rooted in the primitive and the paleolithic--our body is a vertebrate mammal being--and our souls are out in the wilderness."

--Gary Snyder

The Practice of the Wild

Monday, January 22, 2024

To The Rain

 

You reach me out of the age of the air 
 clear
 falling toward me
 each one new
 if any of you has a name
 it is unknown

 but waited for you here
 that long
 for you to fall through it knowing nothing

 hem of the garment
do not wait
 until I can love all that I am to know
 for maybe that will never be

 touch me this time
 let me love what I cannot know
 as the man born blind may love color
 until all that he loves
 fills him with color

--W.S Merwin

Generally when Merwin writes a poem "to" something or someone, the "I" in the poem is talking "to" that "person."  So he is addressing the rain (and, the raindrops.)  That seems clear enough in the first stanza.  But there are some tricky tenses and referents in the second.  Perhaps what waited was the unknown name:"rain."  Something perhaps is suggested about individuality and what they are in common, as well as the difference between the physical drops and their name.  The "it" could be the rain again, but it more likely seems to be the air the rain falls through. 

  In the next stanza, "hem of the garment" is addressed, often interpreted as a Biblical reference, an instrument of revelation perhaps, but it may still be (at the same time) the rain.  The imploring "touch me this time" would still be the rain but as a kind of revelation?  In any case, the final lines are very powerful.  The repetition of word sounds in the otherwise awkward  "maybe that will never be" sets up this powerful repetition of "color," partly through the music of the lines.  Another repetition in sound and sense is the word "know" (or "knowing") that appears three times in this short poem, each time in some way incomplete.  What lies beyond it can only be expressed in the final lines and what they suggest to us.